From 9d7ff77375b580349990e5e981e76aff19374e07 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Jiuzhi Qi <35633477+jzhzj@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Wed, 3 Apr 2019 11:56:47 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] revised several typos and grammatical errors --- README_EN.md | 7 +++---- proposal/proposal_template.md | 14 +++++++------- 2 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-) diff --git a/README_EN.md b/README_EN.md index 56e2a24..21c553a 100644 --- a/README_EN.md +++ b/README_EN.md @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ 996.ICU ======= * [Chinese version](./README.md) - + The name `996.ICU` refers to **"Work by '996', sick in ICU"**, an ironic saying among Chinese programmers, which means that by following the "996" work schedule, you are risking yourself getting into the ICU (Intensive Care Unit). [![LICENSE](https://img.shields.io/badge/license-Anti%20996-blue.svg)](https://github.com/996icu/996.ICU/blob/master/LICENSE) @@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ Principles and purposes * This is not a political movement. We firmly uphold the labor law and require employers to respect the legitimate rights and interests of their employees. -* It is a great progress from closed source to open source, and it will also be a great progress from open source to emphasize labor rights at the same time. What we want is to create an open source software license that advocates for workers' rights. +* It is a great progress from closed source to open source, and it will also be a great progress from open source to emphasizing labor rights at the same time. What we want is to create an open source software license that advocates for workers' rights. * We are willing to hear all positive and constructive proposals and advocate for mature and responsible speech. @@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ Community powers - [996.TSC](https://github.com/lxlxw/996.TSC) is a repo designed to let more people know and join the activity of 996.ICU. - [996.LIST](https://github.com/fengT-T/996_list) is a repo of a rank list of 996 companies and 955 companies. - + Where are the issues? @@ -94,4 +94,3 @@ License - This version of Anti-996 License is drafted by [Katt Gu, J.D, University of Illinois, College of Law](https://scholar.google.com.sg/citations?user=PTcpQwcAAAAJ&hl=en&oi=ao); advised by [Suji Yan](https://www.linkedin.com/in/tedkoyan/), CEO of [Dimension](https://www.dimension.im). - This draft is adapted from the MIT license. For more detailed explanation, please see [Wiki](https://github.com/kattgu7/996-License-Draft/wiki). This license is designed to be compatible with all major open source licenses. - For law professionals or anyone who is willing to contribute to further version directly, please go to [Anti-996-License-1.0](https://github.com/kattgu7/996-License-Draft). Thank you. - diff --git a/proposal/proposal_template.md b/proposal/proposal_template.md index d789b71..fbb5d61 100644 --- a/proposal/proposal_template.md +++ b/proposal/proposal_template.md @@ -12,24 +12,24 @@ Post-History:| None ## Why this Proposal? I write this template for the whole community.
-Hope we can record useful and valuable suggestions and make they true. +Hope we can record useful and valuable suggestions and make them true. ## Community Value Provide a template for new proposals.
-A proposal can be used to record suggestions and aggrements.
-It's better for community members to understand and review what import decisions has been made and discussed. +A proposal can be used to record suggestions and agreements.
+It's better for community members to understand and review what import decisions have been made and discussed. ## Problems -In this part, the proposer should describle what problems we are facing.
+In this part, the proposer should describe what problems we are facing.
For example, currently, we don't have a way to record import decisions and suggestions.
Pull Requests area is too general and not a good way to express ideas.
We need a much more formal channel. ## Solutions -In this part, the proposer should statement the solutions or proposals to solve this problems listed in ***Problems*** part.
+In this part, the proposer should statement the solutions or proposals to solve these problems listed in ***Problems*** part.
For example, we add the proposal directory in the repo and init this proposal template to help the community to build a much more formal channel for suggestion and discussion. ## Resource & Requirements @@ -38,12 +38,12 @@ In this part, list out the resource or other requirements required by the propos ## Actions & implementation Plan -In this part, the proposer should describle the actions and implementation plan after the proposal is approved by the community. +In this part, the proposer should describe the actions and implementation plan after the proposal is approved by the community. ## References In the part, list out links to the reference resource. -For example, for this proposal the main reference is
+For example, for this proposal, the main reference is
- [PEP 1 -- PEP Purpose and Guidelines](https://www.python.org/dev/peps/pep-0001/) ## Copyright