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@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ However, when his suggestions were rejected by the designers of UNIX, he thought
 So Linus devised a Kernel named Linux in 1991. Though he would need programs like File Manager, Document Editors, Audio -Video programs to run on it.
 As time passed by, he collaborated with other programmers in places like MIT and applications for Linux started to appear. So around 1991, a working Linux operating system with some applications was officially launched, and this was the start of one of the most loved and open-source OS options available today. 
 The earlier versions of Linux were not so user-friendly as they were in use by computer programmers and Linus Torvalds never had it in mind to commercialize his product. 
-This definitely curbed the Linux's popularity as other commercially oriented Operating System Windows got famous. Nonetheless, the open-source aspect of the Linux operating system made it more robust. 
+This definitely curbed Linux's popularity while another commercially oriented operating system, Windows, got famous. Nonetheless, the open-source aspect of the Linux operating system made it more robust and accessible. 
 
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