From 12388ac1ba259dfdbcc786aa06406d98c35e86d6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: David Hall Date: Thu, 24 Jan 2019 13:25:06 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] Minor spelling and grammar changes (#23730) Changed "This definitely curbed the Linux's popularity as other commercially oriented Operating System Windows got famous. Nonetheless, the open-source aspect of the Linux operating system made it more robust." to "This definitely curbed Linux's popularity while another commercially oriented operating system, Windows, got famous. Nonetheless, the open-source aspect of the Linux operating system made it more robust and accessible." --- guide/english/linux/linux-brief-history/index.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/guide/english/linux/linux-brief-history/index.md b/guide/english/linux/linux-brief-history/index.md index 00ccc5d922..939777616a 100644 --- a/guide/english/linux/linux-brief-history/index.md +++ b/guide/english/linux/linux-brief-history/index.md @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ However, when his suggestions were rejected by the designers of UNIX, he thought So Linus devised a Kernel named Linux in 1991. Though he would need programs like File Manager, Document Editors, Audio -Video programs to run on it. As time passed by, he collaborated with other programmers in places like MIT and applications for Linux started to appear. So around 1991, a working Linux operating system with some applications was officially launched, and this was the start of one of the most loved and open-source OS options available today. The earlier versions of Linux were not so user-friendly as they were in use by computer programmers and Linus Torvalds never had it in mind to commercialize his product. -This definitely curbed the Linux's popularity as other commercially oriented Operating System Windows got famous. Nonetheless, the open-source aspect of the Linux operating system made it more robust. +This definitely curbed Linux's popularity while another commercially oriented operating system, Windows, got famous. Nonetheless, the open-source aspect of the Linux operating system made it more robust and accessible. #### More Information: