diff --git a/guide/english/html/mailto-links/index.md b/guide/english/html/mailto-links/index.md
index 5d49ef5b8c..3e9060bedb 100644
--- a/guide/english/html/mailto-links/index.md
+++ b/guide/english/html/mailto-links/index.md
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ title: Mailto Links
## Mailto Links
-A mailto link is a kind of hyperlink (``) with special parameters that lets you specify additional recipients, a subject line, and/or a body text.
+A mailto link is a hyperlink (``) with parameters that let you specify additional recipients, a subject line, and/or a body text.
### The basic syntax with a recipient is:
@@ -22,29 +22,28 @@ If you want to add a specific subject to that mail, be careful to add `%20` or `
Similarly, you can add a specific message in the body portion of the email:
Again, spaces have to be replaced by `%20` or `+`.
-After the subject paramater, any additional parameter must be preceded by `&`.
-Example: Say you want users to send an email to their friends about their progress at Free Code Camp.
+After the subject parameter, any additional parameter must be preceded by `&`.
+
+Example: To enable a user to send an email to their friends about their progress at Free Code Camp:
Address: empty
Subject: Great news
-Body: I am becoming a developer
+Body: I am becoming a developer!
Your html link now:
```html
Send mail!
```
-Here, we've left mailto empty (mailto:?). This will open the user's email client and the user will add the recipient addresses themselves.
+In this instance we have left mailto empty (mailto:?) which will open the user's email client and the user will add the recipient's email address.
#### Adding more recipients:
+Separate each email address with a comma to add additional recipients.
+Additional parameters, such as cc and bcc, are preceded by `&`.
-In the same manner, you can add CC (Carbon Copy) and BCC (Blind Carbon Copy) parameters.
-Separate each address by a comma.
-
-Additional parameters must be preceded by `&`.
```html
Send mail!
```