diff --git a/guide/english/miscellaneous/getting-a-coding-job/index.md b/guide/english/miscellaneous/getting-a-coding-job/index.md
index 7e5a784c05..a26c114a38 100644
--- a/guide/english/miscellaneous/getting-a-coding-job/index.md
+++ b/guide/english/miscellaneous/getting-a-coding-job/index.md
@@ -10,15 +10,15 @@ Free Code Camp will help you prepare for a coding job.
 *   There are hundreds of thousands of unfilled coding jobs.
 *   Employers and the US government have joined together to promote nontraditional coding programs like Free Code Camp.
 *   Full stack JavaScript and Swift are two of the best paying skill sets, and have a ton of job openings.
-*   The best proof that you're an employable developer is a portfolio filled with real apps that real people are using.
+*   The best proof that you're an employable developer is a portfolio filled with real world apps that real people are using.
 
-You'll still need to develop basic interviewing skills and soft skills (if you've been working a knowledge-worker type job for a few years, you probably already have these).
+It's not enough to just master the code, you'll still need to develop basic interviewing skills and soft skills (if you've been working a knowledge-worker type job for a few years, you probably already have these).
 
 Resources to help improve your coding skills for interviews:
 *	<a href='https://www.hackerrank.com/interview/interview-preparation-kit' target='_blank' rel='nofollow'>Hackerrank </a>
 *	<a href='https://www.interviewcake.com/' target='_blank' rel='nofollow'>Interview Cake </a>
 
-You'll also need to work hard to network with coders in your city. You can do this by joining <a href='https://github.com/FreeCodeCamp/FreeCodeCamp/wiki/LocalGroups-List' target='_blank' rel='nofollow'>your city's Local Group</a> and participating in as many events as possible.
+You'll also need to work hard to network with coders in your city. You can do this by joining <a href='https://github.com/FreeCodeCamp/FreeCodeCamp/wiki/LocalGroups-List' target='_blank' rel='nofollow'>your city's Local Group</a>  being active with the online community and participating in as many events as possible.
 
 I've found <a href='https://github.com/cassidoo/getting-a-gig' target='_blank' rel='nofollow'>this</a> link to be useful. It does a great job of explaining the process.