From 77b7b170968ef56e4255ad3cc8c11d4e6adc06fe Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Schalk Neethling Date: Mon, 12 Feb 2018 14:30:43 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] Language update suggestions for basic HTML curriculum (#16697) * Language update suggestions for basic HTML curriculum * fix: Changes based on review feedback --- .../basic-html-and-html5.json | 14 +++++++------- 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/seed/challenges/01-responsive-web-design/basic-html-and-html5.json b/seed/challenges/01-responsive-web-design/basic-html-and-html5.json index 528de691b8..7f5fae51a1 100644 --- a/seed/challenges/01-responsive-web-design/basic-html-and-html5.json +++ b/seed/challenges/01-responsive-web-design/basic-html-and-html5.json @@ -183,8 +183,8 @@ "description": [ "Over the next two sections, we'll build an HTML5 app that will look something like this:", "\"A", - "The h2 element you enter will create an h2 element on the website.", - "This element tells the browser about the structure of your website. h1 elements are often used for main headings, while h2 elements are generally used for subheadings. There are also h3, h4, h5 and h6 elements to indicate different and new sections.", + "The h2 element you will be adding in this step will add a level two heading to the web page.", + "This element tells the browser about the structure of your website. h1 elements are often used for main headings, while h2 elements are generally used for subheadings. There are also h3, h4, h5 and h6 elements to indicate different levels of subheadings.", "
", "Add an h2 tag that says \"CatPhotoApp\" to create a second HTML element below your \"Hello World\" h1 element." ], @@ -249,8 +249,8 @@ "id": "bad87fee1348bd9aedf08801", "title": "Inform with the Paragraph Element", "description": [ - "p elements are the preferred element for normal-sized paragraph text on websites. P is short for \"paragraph\".", - "You can create a p element like this:", + "p elements are the preferred element for paragraph text on websites. p is short for \"paragraph\".", + "You can create a paragraph element like this:", "<p>I'm a p tag!</p>", "
", "Create a p element below your h2 element, and give it the text \"Hello Paragraph\"." @@ -376,9 +376,9 @@ "id": "bad87fee1348bd9aedf08802", "title": "Uncomment HTML", "description": [ - "Commenting is a way that you can leave comments within your code without affecting the code itself.", + "Commenting is a way that you can leave comments for other developers within your code without affecting the resulting output that is displayed the the end user.", "Commenting is also a convenient way to make code inactive without having to delete it entirely.", - "You can start a comment with <!-- and end a comment with -->", + "Comments in HTML starts with <!--, and ends with a -->", "
", "Uncomment your h1, h2 and p elements." ], @@ -448,7 +448,7 @@ "Remember that in order to start a comment, you need to use <!-- and to end a comment, you need to use -->", "Here you'll need to end the comment before your h2 element begins.", "
", - "Comment out your h1 element and your p element, but leave your h2 element uncommented." + "Comment out your h1 element and your p element, but not your h2 element." ], "challengeSeed": [ "