diff --git a/guide/english/computer-science/index.md b/guide/english/computer-science/index.md index 74b45d04e6..5ab7bac0be 100644 --- a/guide/english/computer-science/index.md +++ b/guide/english/computer-science/index.md @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ Computer Science is the study of computers and the concepts that make computers Much of computer science was pioneered in the latter half of the 20th century. -Today, if you attend an undergraduate computer science course, you will learn about both hardware and software. You'll learn how computers work at a low level of abstraction (machine language) and at a high level of abstraction (modern scripting langauges like JavaScript). +Students who are interested in computer science will first learn about both hardware and software. It is important to learn how computers work at a low level of abstraction (machine language) and at a high level of abstraction (modern scripting languages like JavaScript) because it will help individuals understand computer science intuitively. In 21st century, computer science has become a backbone for every technological leap we take forward.