From 7e69a4e791c2ac7c5415d4fa926333627e553a2e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Jiewei <42847854+yangcode96@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Wed, 27 Mar 2019 11:45:13 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] Change paragraph and spelling error (#28215) Changed "Today, if you attend an undergraduate computer science course, you will learn about both hardware and software. You'll learn how computers work at a low level of abstraction (machine language) and at a high level of abstraction (modern scripting languages like JavaScript)." to "Students who are interested in computer science will first learn about both hardware and software. It is important to learn how computers work at a low level of abstraction (machine language) and at a high level of abstraction (modern scripting languages like JavaScript) because it will help individuals understand computer science intuitively." This change emphasizes the importance of what students are learning today and why it is important. --- guide/english/computer-science/index.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/guide/english/computer-science/index.md b/guide/english/computer-science/index.md index 74b45d04e6..5ab7bac0be 100644 --- a/guide/english/computer-science/index.md +++ b/guide/english/computer-science/index.md @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ Computer Science is the study of computers and the concepts that make computers Much of computer science was pioneered in the latter half of the 20th century. -Today, if you attend an undergraduate computer science course, you will learn about both hardware and software. You'll learn how computers work at a low level of abstraction (machine language) and at a high level of abstraction (modern scripting langauges like JavaScript). +Students who are interested in computer science will first learn about both hardware and software. It is important to learn how computers work at a low level of abstraction (machine language) and at a high level of abstraction (modern scripting languages like JavaScript) because it will help individuals understand computer science intuitively. In 21st century, computer science has become a backbone for every technological leap we take forward.