From 5316b7ac071b95c088cfd954c17e1ed140842b37 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: LumenTeun Date: Tue, 30 Jun 2015 04:28:43 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] Quite a few spelling and grammar fixes --- challenges/basic-bonfires.json | 12 ++++++------ challenges/bootstrap.json | 2 +- field-guides.json | 16 ++++++++-------- 3 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-) diff --git a/challenges/basic-bonfires.json b/challenges/basic-bonfires.json index 14d5a40437..b2a49c8ce3 100644 --- a/challenges/basic-bonfires.json +++ b/challenges/basic-bonfires.json @@ -13,16 +13,16 @@ "OK, we're finally ready to start pair programming!", "Pair Programming is where two people code together on the same computer. It is an efficient way to collaborate, and widely practiced at software companies. Pair Programming is one of the core concepts of \"Agile\" Software Development, which you will hear more about later.", "Many people use Skype or Google Hangouts to pair program, but if you talk with professional software engineers, they will tell you that it's not really pair programming unless both people have the ability to use the keyboard and mouse.", - "The most popular tool for pair programming is Screen Hero. You can download Screen Hero for Mac or Windows. Create your new user account from within the app.", - "We have a special chat room for people ready to pair program. Go to our LetsPair chatroom on gitter and type \"Hello Pair Programmers!\"", + "The most popular tool for pair programming is Screenhero. You can download Screenhero for Mac or Windows. Create your new user account from within the app.", + "We have a special chat room for people ready to pair program. Go to our LetsPair chatroom on Gitter and type \"Hello Pair Programmers!\"", "If someone is available, they will be your \"pair\" - the person you pair programming with.", "If no one gets back to you in the first few minutes, don't worry. There will be lots of opportunities to pair program in the future.", - "If someone does get back to you, private message them and ask for the email address they used to register Screen Hero.", - "Add them as a new contact in Screen Hero, then click the monitor-looking button to attempt to share your screen with them.", - "Once the Screen Hero session starts, your screen's margins will glow orange. You are now sharing your screen.", + "If someone does get back to you, private message them and ask for the email address they used to register Screenhero.", + "Add them as a new contact in Screenhero, then click the monitor-looking button to attempt to share your screen with them.", + "Once the Screenhero session starts, your screen's margins will glow orange. You are now sharing your screen.", "Your pair will have their own cursor, and will be able to type text on his or her keyboard.", "Now it's time to tackle our Bonfires. You can begin them by advancing to the next challenge.", - "Once you you finish pair programming, end the session in Screen Hero session.", + "Once you you finish pair programming, end the session in Screenhero session.", "Congratulations! You have completed your first pair programming session.", "Pair program as much as possible with different campers until you've completed all the Bonfire challenges. This is a big time investment, but the JavaScript practice you get will be well worth it!", "Mark this Waypoint complete and move on." diff --git a/challenges/bootstrap.json b/challenges/bootstrap.json index 2c0ff3b031..483af976d8 100644 --- a/challenges/bootstrap.json +++ b/challenges/bootstrap.json @@ -622,7 +622,7 @@ "Bootstrap uses a responsive grid system, which makes it easy to put elements into rows and specify each element's relative width. Most of Bootstrap's classes can be applied to a div element.", "Here's a diagram of how Bootstrap's 12-column grid layout works:", "", - "Note that in this illustration, we use the col-md-* class. Here, \"md\" means \"medium\", and \"*\" is a number specifying how many columns wide the element should be. In this case, we're specifying how many columns wide an element should be on a medium-sized screen, such as a laptop.", + "Note that in this illustration, the col-md-* class is being used. Here, \"md\" means \"medium\", and \"*\" is a number specifying how many columns wide the element should be. In this case, the column width of an element on a medium-sized screen, such as a laptop, is being specified.", "In the Cat Photo App that we're building, we'll use col-xs-*, where \"*\" is the number of columns wide the element should be, and \"xs\" means \"extra small\", like an extra-small mobile phone screen.", "The \"row\" class is applied to a div, and the buttons themselves can be wrapped within it." ], diff --git a/field-guides.json b/field-guides.json index 91f0f190e2..b9a2522b02 100644 --- a/field-guides.json +++ b/field-guides.json @@ -204,7 +204,7 @@ "

Pair programming is where two people code together on one computer.

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You discuss different approaches to solving problems, and keep each other motivated. The result is better code than either of you could have written by yourselves. Because of its benefits, many engineers pair program full time. And it's the best way to learn coding. Thanks to tools that allow two people to share mouse and keyboard inputs, you can pair program with a friend without needing to be in the same room.

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By pair programming with other Free Code Camp students on our coding challenges. Eventually, you'll work with people at nonprofits to build real-life software solutions.

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By pair programming with other campers on our coding challenges you'll develop the necessary skills to work with people at nonprofits to build real-life software solutions.

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  1. Follow this tutorial to set up your computer for streaming.
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  2. Contact Jason Ruekert - he's @jsonify in Gitter. He's in charge of our Twitch.tv channel. Tell him what you'd like to stream, and when you're available to stream.
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  3. Jason will pair with you using Screen Hero to verify your computer is configured properly to stream.
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  4. Jason will pair with you using Screenhero to verify your computer is configured properly to stream.
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Be respectful of your audience. Everything you stream should be related to coding JavaScript, and should be acceptable for children. (Yes, children do sometimes watch our Twitch stream to learn to code).

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You'll use Screen Hero to pair program starting with http://freecodecamp.com/challenges/pair-program-on-bonfires

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You'll use Screenhero to pair program starting with http://freecodecamp.com/challenges/pair-program-on-bonfires

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  • Zipline: Stylize Stories on Camper News
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  • Zipline: Wikipedia Viewer
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    This won't be a new curriculum - it will just the first 200 hours of our full stack JavaScript curriculum.

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    This won't be a new curriculum - it will just be the first 200 hours of our full stack JavaScript curriculum.

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    All campers who have already completed these challenges are retroactively eligible for the certificate!

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