From ebe9e8f66ff5e11bb5a689d727a9fbf4f1b4798a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: celticaire <42580254+celticaire@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 21 Mar 2019 12:53:40 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] Fixed awkward wording (#28320)

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 guide/english/javascript/with/index.md | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/guide/english/javascript/with/index.md b/guide/english/javascript/with/index.md
index ff1964edae..c7347f85bb 100644
--- a/guide/english/javascript/with/index.md
+++ b/guide/english/javascript/with/index.md
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ title: With
 ---
 ## With
 
-JavaScript's `with` statement is a shorthand way for editing several properties on one object. Most developers discourage usage of `with`, and you are best not using this keyword.
+JavaScript's `with` statement is a shorthand way to edit several properties on one object. Most developers discourage its usage, with best practice being not to use `with`. See Alternatives below for other approaches.
 
 **Note**: `"strict mode"` in ECMAScript 5 forbids usage of `with`.
 
@@ -16,13 +16,13 @@ with (expression)
 
 
 ### Example Usage
-In JavaScript, you can individually modify an object's properties like below:
+In JavaScript, you can individually modify an object's properties as below:
 ```javascript
 let earth = {};
 earth.moons = 1;
 earth.continents = 7;
 ```
-`with` gives you a shorthand to modify the properties on an object:
+`with` gives you a shorthand way to modify the properties on an object:
 ```javascript
 with (earth) {
   moons = 1;
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ with (earth) {
 }
 ```
 
-While this example is contrived, you can understand use cases of `with` more if you have larger objects like below:
+While this example is contrived, you can understand cases of `with` better if you use larger objects as below:
 ```javascript
 earth.continents.australia.geography.ocean = "Pacific";
 earth.continents.australia.geography.river = "Murray";
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ earth.continents.australia.geography.mountain = "Kosciuszko";
 ```
 
 ### Alternatives
-You should not use `with` as it has subtle bugs and compatibility issues. A highly recommended approach is to assign the object to a variable, and then modify the variable's properties. Here is an example using a larger object:
+You should not use `with`, as it has subtle bugs and compatibility issues. A highly recommended approach is to assign the object to a variable, and then to modify the variable's properties. Here is an example using a larger object:
 ```javascript
 let earth = {
   continents: {