Line 11: removed new before technolgies//not needed
removed comma after developers
added being before invented
changed to what degree is this a good thing,
Full stop after another time
added that after say
Removed are "dark arts" and added comma
Line 13: Rmoved all after often not //not needed
Line 15: Removed comma after user //not needed
Line 27: Added "so" in one sense "you can say" that "your"
Line 29: changed for to by
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