Changed text in line 6 to improve flow. Reword the second sentence on line 12. More rewording on line 13. Added a comma to the second sentence in line 13. Split the final sentence in half to simplify it and easier to read.
Changed text in line 6 to improve flow. Reword the second sentence on line 12. More rewording on line 13. Added a comma to the second sentence in line 13. Split the final sentence in half to simplify it and easier to read.