update: slices 23th exercise

16-slices/exercises/23-limit-the-backing-array-sharing/solution/api/api.go

@@ -1,21 +1,20 @@
 package api
 
+// The original temperatures slice.
 var temps = []int{5, 10, 3, 25, 45, 80, 90}
 
 // Read returns a range of temperature readings beginning from
 // the `start` until to the `stop`.
 func Read(start, stop int) []int {
 	//
-	// Uses a full slice expression to control the length of the
-	// backing array (or the capacity of the returned slice).
-	//
-	// So the next append allocates a new backing array, which
-	// in turn doesn't overwrite the temps slice's backing array.
-	//                           ^^
-	//                           ||
-	//                          /  \
-	//                         |    |
+	// This third index prevents the clients of this package from
+	// overwriting the original temps slice's backing array. It
+	// limits the capacity of the returned slice. See the
+	// full slice expressions lecture.
+	//                            ^
+	//                            |
 	portion := temps[start:stop:stop]
+
 	return portion
 }
 

16-slices/exercises/23-limit-the-backing-array-sharing/solution/main.go

@@ -17,6 +17,6 @@ func main() {
 	temps := api.Read(0, 3)
 	temps = append(temps, []int{1, 3}...)
 
-	fmt.Println("API's readings:", api.All())
-	fmt.Println("Your readings :", temps)
+	fmt.Println("api.temps     :", api.All())
+	fmt.Println("main.temps    :", temps)
 }